first haiku; backdated to 7/18 to comply with all moon cycles

[decapitating]

newborn deer horns sprout
hazy changes to senses
iris moon's effect

[ the username is "3rdHaiku", and the post comes without fanfare, introduction, or closure. ]

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[reachingfangs]

[ Renji doesn't need a name to know exactly who this is, and after some deliberation he answers in kind. ]

same fucking thing here
hair's all tangled in these tines
this moon is the worst

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[codecmoment]

it's not that bad.
it makes me appealing to people because i become cute.

[hoasen]

[Did new haikus suddenly get birthed from this? At least she's getting better at this because of Izuminokami. Not that she could write back in kind.]

So your horns are...tiny?

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[coasts]

[ Was that a haiku? Samatoki doesn't even consider the possibility and just replies with his own verse... though with a different format. ]

knock knock who is it
wolf tail and wolf ears out
next thing its dicks out
slap slap slap

[nakemen]

heh not bad but let me show you how a real master does it [He isn't a master.

He believes he is. But he isn't.]

its that moon again
antlers are real annoying
i wish they were gone

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[peerlesscucumber]

Interesting poem. Is there a particular style you're making use of?

[ Shen Qingqiu does actually recognise this is a haiku, but since he as Shen Qingqiu shouldn't... time for a scholar peak lord to ask after something which would in fact interest him. ]

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[liveandforgive]

That sounds like a poem.

[ Very good, Cloud. ...what's a haiku? ]

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[unevoke]

put your poems in a notebook, not in a message to everyone here

[ where is the 'mark as spam' option ]

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[im_gonna_heal_u]

You have seen nothing
Un til you learn that your hair
is all tentacles

QED

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[ysayle]

[ She's taken some time to grow use to the technology here. But this is the first time she has reached out in answer - though not in rhyme. A bard she is not. ]

Pray excuse me, should my question seem prying. I am still adjusting to such lunar cycles.

Horns? Not ears? Are they particularly long?

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[sheisthewind]

[It took her an embarrassing amount of attempts to try to post a text reply, until she finally settles on what she knows how to do.]

Interesting poem.

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[madannoshashu]

iris furry time
so much fun, it's just a crime
look! i made a rhyme

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[profanation]

greater than bestial
beyond base a man can be
refrigerator

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[ultralord]

it's close, but it's not a good rap without rhymes
i'm disappointed

( Who said it was a rap to begin with... )