first haiku; backdated to 7/18 to comply with all moon cycles

[decapitating]

newborn deer horns sprout
hazy changes to senses
iris moon's effect

[ the username is "3rdHaiku", and the post comes without fanfare, introduction, or closure. ]

Comments

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[ultralord]

it's close, but it's not a good rap without rhymes
i'm disappointed

( Who said it was a rap to begin with... )

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[decapitating]

It is a poem. I believe there's someone else here you can talk to if you're looking for a rapper.